Temeraire :3

I edited the chapter.

Just my two cents on the rather lumpish explanation on the first Goblin War, but you don't need it here. There's no need to explain the backstory this early, and ...

Actually, this was going to turn out as a prologue. All the people you see here will be vital in the latter parts of the story. That is why I ...

Is it more readable now, Snoink?

Thanks Snoink! I'll check out the links.

Our votes are private, right?

You can also find this in my blog, which I'll update when I create a chapter. “It seems we have come to the Gates of Hell,” murmured the man, flying ...

Look at my blog for chapter 1.

Sick serpent slithers sideways. Next Letter: A

First of all, great idea in getting all of your information down first. I like the different species that you used and how you described each one. My favorite were ...

I'm finishing up the world map, so stay tuned for new info.

Thank you all for your replies! Alainna, you make me blush :P And Via, i wasn't affected by the fires.

Updated the first post. Will begin on ships now.

10/10 I think it's hot! I love it. 0/10 Sorry :?

Thanks May! Since you can see I am very serious when it comes to descriptions, you can probably imagine why I hate doing Book Reports that can only be a ...